• 22-04-2022, 22:27:03
    #1
    Selamlar arkadaşlar,
    Alt kısımdaki makale ingilizcesi nasıl? Prof şekilde kaleme alınmış bir makale mi? Bu makaleyi uzman makalecinin kaleminden yazılmış bir makale olarak satın alır mıydınız?
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    Places to Visit in Paris

    If you have just landed in Paris, you'll want to know what to see. This article will provide a quick overview of the most important sites and museums to see. From the Louvre to Notre Dame Cathedral, we'll cover everything from gardens to museums and more. We'll also talk about the Bibliotheque-Musee de opera. But first, let's take a look at some places to visit in Paris that you simply must see.
    Louvre

    If you're looking for a great way to see the city's most famous attractions, the Louvre should be on your list. This museum is the largest in the world and a city within a city. In 2018, about 10.2 million people visited the Louvre. You can see more than 35,000 works of art. The museum is divided into eight departments and three wings, and you can choose which parts of the Louvre you want to visit. Be sure to take your time and pace yourself through the crowds to see everything.
    Notre Dame Cathedral

    When in Paris, you must visit the Notre Dame Cathedral, which is a medieval Catholic cathedral on the Île de la Cité. It is a shrine to the Virgin Mary and considered one of the best examples of French Gothic architecture. It is also home to the world's largest goldfish tank. This is the perfect place for a romantic evening! In the evening, you can stroll through the nearby Luxembourg Gardens, a popular nightlife area.
    Jardin du Luxembourg

    Located in the 6th arrondissement of Paris, the Jardin du Luxembourg (also known as the Luxembourg Garden or the Sénat) is a beautiful garden located in the city. It was originally created in 1612 when Marie de Medici built the Luxembourg Palace as her new residence. The garden is now known as one of Paris's most beautiful public spaces and is a popular destination for people from all over the world.
    Bibliotheque-Musee de l'Opera

    There are many places to visit in Paris. From secluded squares with flowing fountains to elegant tea salons with glass-covered pastry cases, Paris offers the most enchanting experiences. Whether you're visiting for business or pleasure, Paris's romantic aura will cast a spell that lasts a lifetime. Here are a few of the best.
    Galeries Lafayette

    You've heard of the famed department store in Paris, but have you visited Galeries Lafayette? It was established in 1894 as a sundries shop and morphed into a luxury bazaar by 1912. This department store in Paris is not to be missed if you're in the mood for some shopping! If you're not into shopping, you should still check out its rooftop restaurants and gourmet shops. You can even join a cooking class or play petanque on the roof. Paris is a city of many faces and experiences, and Galeries Lafayette has it all!
    La Madeleine

    When you're looking for a place to pray in Paris, you can't go wrong with église de la Madeleine. Located in the eighth arrondissement, this church was once a temple dedicated to Napoleon's army glory but later gained a more fitting name: that of Jesus' companion Mary Magdalene. The Madeleine Church is a must-see attraction for any visitor to Paris.
    Tour Montparnasse

    One of the most impressive skyscrapers in Paris is the Tour Maine-Montparnasse, commonly known as the "Tour Montparnasse." Standing 210 meters tall, this office building was built between 1969 and 1973. Until the completion of Tour First, it was the tallest building in France. Now, the tallest building in Paris is the Tour First, which stands at 231 meters.
    Place de la Concorde

    The Place de la Concorde is a large plaza with statues and fountains. It is dominated by a 3,000-year-old obelisk gifted to France by the Khedive of Egypt in 1829. During the French Revolution, the Place de la Concorde was a notorious execution spot, but its redesigned appearance has preserved its impression of open space. In fact, the hotel that stands on the site is one of the oldest in Paris.
    Musee d'Orsay

    The Musée d'Orsay is a museum located on the Left Bank of the Seine. Located in the old Gare doorway, a Beaux-Arts railway station that was built between 1898 and 1900, it houses primarily French art. The collection spans from 1848 to 1914 and includes paintings, sculptures, furniture, and photography. Visiting this museum is a great way to explore the culture and history of France.
    Pere Lachaise Cemetery

    The grave of Jim Morrison, lead singer of the rock band The Doors, is located in Pere Lachaise Cemetery. The grave is largely unmarked, but a recent graffiti project has changed that. Fans have started leaving messages and gifts at the grave of the eponymous rock star. You can't miss it if you're in Paris! There are a variety of places to visit in Paris that include the gravesite of Jim Morrison.
  • 22-04-2022, 22:28:17
    #2
    Başlık dağılımı çok fazla, açıklamalar ise çok kısa.
    Ben şahsen almazdım "detaya" girmesi gerekirdi.
    Yanı sıra ortalama birisi bu makaleyi okuyup anlayabiliyorsa bu sizin için daha güzel bir analiz olacaktır.
    Az bilgisi olan birisi makaleyi anlıyorsa okuma puanı yüksek olacaktır bu da başarıyı getirebilir.
    • Samet
    • DartkGandalf
    Samet ve DartkGandalf bunu beğendi.
    2 kişi bunu beğendi.
  • 22-04-2022, 22:30:51
    #3
    Bence ideal. Tek bir makale tipine bağlı kalmamak lazım. Kategoriye göre değerlendirmek lazım. Bir gezi, seyahat sitesi için ideal ölçülerde bence.
  • 22-04-2022, 22:32:25
    #4
    Hocam, üniversite 1. sınıfta İngilizce 101 dersi vardır standart, tam olarak o dille yazılmış. Kullanılan edatlar vs çok tipik. Makale doğru mu? Doğru. İmlasal hatalar var mı? Yok lakin bunu 7. sınıfa giden bir İngiliz öğrenci rahatlıkla yazabilir. Bu şekilde izah edeyim.
  • 22-04-2022, 22:36:32
    #5
    SEO Expert
    Şuraya takıldım ve devamını okumayı bıraktım:

    “This museum is the largest in the world and a city within a city.”

    Şu şekilde daha doğru ve anlamlı olur: “This is the largest museum in the world, it is like a city within a city.”
  • 22-04-2022, 22:43:02
    #6
    Nerede kullanacağınıza bağlı olarak iyi de olabilir kötü de. Üniversite hocasına teslim edilecekse kötü, gezi blogunaysa iyi.
    Bir websitesine içerik girdiğinde kullanılan dilin en basit şekilde olması gerekir, okuyan kullanıcı native bile olsa dil yeterliliği fazla olmayabilir. O yüzden zaten abartı dil kullanımı gereksiz.
  • 22-04-2022, 23:13:11
    #7
    SinemBilisim adlı üyeden alıntı: mesajı görüntüle
    Nerede kullanacağınıza bağlı olarak iyi de olabilir kötü de. Üniversite hocasına teslim edilecekse kötü, gezi blogunaysa iyi.
    Bir websitesine içerik girdiğinde kullanılan dilin en basit şekilde olması gerekir, okuyan kullanıcı native bile olsa dil yeterliliği fazla olmayabilir. O yüzden zaten abartı dil kullanımı gereksiz.
    Aynen, arkadaşlar akademik ingilizce falan kasmışlar. Zaten basit bir dil kullanılması Flesch reading score için daha önemli, en ufak bir "SEO" bilgisi olan bunu bilir. Bu makale için denilebilecek tek şey ideal bir makale. Napsın adam "Quantum Plasmonics" ile alakalı bir makale yazmıyor sonuçta. Seyahat bloğuna yazı yazıyor. Hintlisi de okuyacak bunu, pakisi de o yamuk ağızlı ingilizceleri ile.

    İnsanlar tam aksine rephrasing sitelerinde yazdıkları içerikleri daha da basitleştirmeye çalışıyorlar bu neticede.
  • 22-04-2022, 23:16:37
    #8
    we'll cover everything from gardens to museums and more
    Bu cumlede everything yerine everywhere deseniz daha doğru olur.

    When in Paris, you must visit the Notre Dame Cathedral, which is a medieval Catholic cathedral on the Île de la Cité.
    Virgulden sonra which kullanmişsaniz bu non defining olur ki ara cumle demektir. Ardindan bir cumle devam etmelidir. Virgülü kaldırın dogrudan defining olmasi gerekir.

    If you're looking for a great way to see the city's most famous attractions, the Louvre should be on your list.
    Bu cumlede louvre un basında the olmaz. Louvre muzesi zaten tektir. The gelmez.
    İng ogretmeniyim. Cok takiyorum ince gramer hatalarina. Daha bircok yerde var da tek tek yazamam.