I am going to train you to write effective single-sentence openers.
These are proven ways to "hook" the reader's attention in the very first sentence.
Here are the 6 most proven single-sentence openers:
1. Open with 1 strong, declarative sentence.
2. Open with a thought-provoking question.
3. Open with a controversial opinion.
4. Open with a moment in time.
5. Open with a vulnerable statement.
6. Open with a weird, unique insight.
Now, I'm going to give you examples of each so you can learn how each different kind of single-sentence opener should be written:
1. Open with 1 strong, declarative sentence.
- Becoming successful doesnt just happen.
- The wealthiest people in the world have the simplest investment portfolios.
- Going to the gym isnt a hobby, its a lifestyle.
- The key to effective project management isnt a tool or platformits your ability to listen.
- You cant change the world without first changing yourself.
1. Open with a thought-provoking question.
- Did you know the average Millennial has less than $10,000 in their savings account?
- Whats the difference between someone who goes pro versus someone who remains an amateur?
- Is there such a thing as eternal happiness?
- Is artistic talent innate? Or can it be taught?
- If youve been thinking about writing online, was your first impulse to start a blog?
1. Open with a controversial opinion.
- Its impossible to be both rich and happy.
- The U.S. should not be involved in the war between Russia and Ukraine.
- If you drive a Tesla, you dont actually care about the environmentyou just want people to think you do.
- Men and women should not make the same amount of money (women should make more).
- Intelligence isnt something youre born with.
1. Open with a moment in time.
- In 1982, David Ogilvy wrote an internal memo to the employees of his advertising agency titled How to write.
- At 5:46 AM Pacific Time, September 11th, 2001, America changed forever.
- My fear of cafeteria trays began in 8th grade.
- When I was 17 years old, I became one of the highest-ranked World of Warcraft players in North America.
1. Open with a vulnerable statement.
- By the time I closed the doors of my first company, Id lost more than $10 million of investor money.
- Ive never been a very social person.
- For 27 years, Ive struggled with alcoholism.
- The night before running my first marathon, I called my ex-girlfriend and told her I still loved her.
- For the first 10 years of my career, I was a terrible employee.
- I dont know anything about investing (nada, zilch).
1. Open with a weird, unique insight.
- Did you know that 85% of the worlds oxygen comes from phytoplankton?
- California is not the largest state in the USAlaska is.
- The average Millennial has less than $60,000 saved up in retirement by the time they reach age 40.
- Crows are one of the most intelligent animals on planet earth.
- My wife can boil a dozen eggs in 7 minutes or less.
I am going to give you the headline of a piece, and you are going to write single-sentence openers based on that headline using these 6 proven single-sentence openerswith 5 opening sentences inside each category.
As a reminder:
Here are the 6 most proven single-sentence openers:
1. Open with 1 strong, declarative sentence.
2. Open with a thought-provoking question.
3. Open with a controversial opinion.
4. Open with a moment in time.
5. Open with a vulnerable statement.
6. Open with a weird, unique insight.
I will give you the headline, and you will write 3 opening sentences for each of these 6 categories.
Also, as a rule of thumb: please do not use the headline itself in the first sentence.
Do you understand, and are you ready for the headline?